Yes, I lost the plot.

It was as if I’d taken a lover.I’d spent day and night with it. I thought of little else.
Pride, love and energy caressed each page. That was how I felt when I finished and printed my first draft.

Yet doubts haunted me. Was it good enough to show off yet? Filled with trepidation, I approached five people to read the first draft. I chose people who I knew would give me honest and direct feedback. I wasn’t interested in feeding my ego. I wanted to develop my writing.

Like waiting for exam results I was restless to have their feedback. Days and weeks rolled by as busy lives got in the way. Then one by one they came back. There were pencil notes on grammar, punctuation and sentence structure. Some pointed out flaws that I’d not seen before; changes in point of view; over explaining a point in two or three ways, repeating some of the same words over and over again. These were just a few areas to work on.

Then my good friend Don sat me down and asked, “What do you want your book to be about?” We talked about the plot. What was I writing? Was the plot a series of events pulled together without any cohesion? Yes, I had lost the plot.

I suddenly saw my book in a different light – it was clear what I needed to do. My book and I needed time apart. Fortunately, it was Christmas and the holiday season  made it easier to deal with any seperation anxiety.

Eight weeks later, I opened the file on the computer – there was my book. I’d missed it. I re-read the first chapter, said goodbye and then deleted it. Then, I painstakenly altered, deleted, expanded, tweaked and corrected. Each chapter and every sentence had to earn it’s  place. I had to be ruthless. With that, I changed the whole direction of the book.

You can’t do that to a lover.

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8 thoughts on “Yes, I lost the plot.

  1. Lemonpath September 18, 2015 / 6:37 pm

    It must have been hard to start again. Lovely post.

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  2. jacquelineobyikocha September 18, 2015 / 7:28 pm

    Sometimes the journey of writing a book can by very winding. Good job for starting again. Keep writing 🙂

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  3. Peter September 19, 2015 / 7:36 am

    Your latest post is an entertaining essay.

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  4. Deb November 30, 2015 / 8:54 pm

    You certainly have been on a journey Sylvia – can’t wait to read the reworked result! So glad you’ve discovered Trove and the wonder that is the State Library. 🙂

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